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Criteria-based Feedback:
** || **Student Reviewer Feedback ** || ||  || Can Grass Roots Videos on health and science be trusted? If so, why? How are Grass Roots Videos different from company-made videos? || ||   || ||    || ||    ||
 * **<span style="color: rgb(234, 11, 11)">Criteria Descriptors
 * <span style="background-color: rgb(227, 222, 222)">**Quality of Content**
 * Does the content (writing) make sense? || Yes, the writing is understandable, but it could be more through and more details could be used. It's overall too short. Include more details on the impacts. ||
 * Can you identify any areas which need clarification? || The part in the wiki that talks about environment needs clarification. The impact isn't really described. ||
 * Pose three questions that arise from your reading || How do you predict these Grass Roots Videos will affect science and health in the future?
 * <span style="background-color: rgb(227, 222, 222)">**Communication**
 * Look at the Discussion pages of the wiki pages - effective communication? || Yes there was effective communication. It is obvious that peer editing has been going on. ||
 * Do they need more? || No, more discussion is not necessary. ||
 * Are they clear in their messages to each other? || Yes, the messages are clear. ||
 * Is there a sense of negotiation and collaboration? || There is a bit of collaboration, but more is needed in contributing to the whole work because one of the discussions said there is only one person doing all the work. ||
 * <span style="background-color: rgb(227, 222, 222)">**Collaboration**
 * Does the work appear to be equally shared? || No, in one of the discussions, someone says that is was just one person doing the job. ||
 * Does there appear to be any difficulties by one or more members of the team? || The only difficulty was that there was no teamwork when writing the wiki. ||
 * <span style="background-color: rgb(227, 222, 222)">**Presentation - Layout and Design**
 * Amount and relevance of graphics and media - comment on that || There is an adequate number of pictures though more wouldn't hurt. I think more videos such as examples of Grass Roots Videos on science and health should be added. ||
 * Recommendations? || The only recommendation is that more writing about the future and media needs to be added. ||

Summary of Feedback:

 * One thing that was very good was the fact that the work seems to be completed because they discussed each topic throughly. They explained how it has impacted scientists and doctors. The pictures were relevent to the topics. They have pictures for each topic that are intresting.
 * One suggestion is to add more examples of grassroot videos. All the team members should be collabrating. It doesn't seem like you are all particapating.
 * One thing we learned that was intresting is that scientists post their discoveries on the internet in the form of grassroot videos.

Our feedback on http://horizonproject2008.wikispaces.com/GRV Science_Health was posted on May 8, 2008 To view our feedback click: [|http://horizonproject2008.wikispaces.com/message/view/GRV Science_Health/4144967]

7-3-Ava M, 7-3-Nathanael F, 7-3-Dionisios H, 7-3-Kyra A
tag: sb_grassrootsvideo