grv_wiki_C_feedback

Criteria-based Feedback:
** || **Student Reviewer Feedback ** || ||  || How does youtube compare to other video websites, for example, veoh? What is your source for your statistics? || ||   || ||    || ||    ||
 * **<span style="color: rgb(234, 11, 11)">Criteria Descriptors
 * <span style="background-color: rgb(227, 222, 222)">**Quality of Content**
 * Does the content (writing) make sense? || We think that the writing is well written but the pictures do not really connect with the writing. ||
 * Can you identify any areas which need clarification? || In the article you talk about podcasting, when you talk about it, some people may not know what a podcast is and don't understand the statistics of podcasts. You should explain what podcasting is. ||
 * Pose three questions that arise from your reading || What is a podcast?
 * <span style="background-color: rgb(227, 222, 222)">**Communication**
 * Look at the Discussion pages of the wiki pages - effective communication? || Yes we think it is effective communication because all the people who are in the discussions give relevant tips and have effective and fluent communication. ||
 * Do they need more? || I think they need more discussion about what is confusing instead of talking about the things that are missing. For example, pictures and citations. ||
 * Are they clear in their messages to each other? || Yes, their messages to each other are clear because they get their point thought to the editors. I think one reason that is clear is that they give examples about what they should fix. ||
 * Is there a sense of negotiation and collaboration? || Yes, because they are working together to fix the project. The people in the discussion give ideas and editors ask questions about it and respond, then they take them into consideration. This shows how they work together and compromise with one another. ||
 * <span style="background-color: rgb(227, 222, 222)">**Collaboration**
 * Does the work appear to be equally shared? || No, the work does not appear to be equally shared. If you look in the history, there seems to be a lot more changes from one specific person, than from the others. It also seems like they are doing everything in one day instead of going back and looking at it. In the discussion tab, one of the team member says that only themselves and one other person working and the others don't work with them. ||
 * Does there appear to be any difficulties by one or more members of the team? || The members of the team seem to have a hard time communicating with each other. As said in this discussion, "have been trying to get in touch with the rest of my team members but none of them will respond. So far the only people that have edited anything on this wiki are Cory and me." This shows that not everyone is working together. In the discussions, only a few people are discussing. ||
 * <span style="background-color: rgb(227, 222, 222)">**Presentation - Layout and Design**
 * Amount and relevance of graphics and media - comment on that || We can't understand what the picture of the dancer had to do with anything. There are a lot of pictures but they do not relate to the content. The writing is about many different things, and the pictures only show one thing. ||
 * Recommendations? || Maybe, you could get examples or short clips from youtube or another video site to display to show what's popular among people now. Maybe, you should add captions to your pictures to show people what the pictures represent. ||

Summary of Feedback:
For each of the questions below consider including information about:
 * Content - clarity, quantity
 * Communicaiton - between the students as collaborators
 * Wiki Presentation - design, use of graphics, layout
 * Wiki Presentation - design, use of graphics, layout


 * //2 things that are very good about this wiki project.//
 * //2 concrete suggestions for improving the wiki page.//
 * //At least 1 example of new knowledge our group has obtained thanks to this wiki page.//

One thing that was very good and should be kept is that they gathered many sources and statistics to back up what they were trying to say which is very informative. something else that is good is why youtube has been used more frequently than television and other websites. Try to include all of your group members in the process of finishing this wiki. also make sure your writing is not only statistics and try to add other facts and opinions to get us more interested. also use other sources rather than the internet like by interviewing people and books. one thing that we learned is how so many more people are watching less television and switching to watching youtube and other website videos.

The page we reviewed is: http://horizonproject2008.wikispaces.com/CWeb Arts_Ent_Leisure Our feedback was posted May 8, 2008. You can see it at: [|http://horizonproject2008.wikispaces.com/message/list/GRV Arts_Ent_Leisure]

Student Reviewers: 7-3-Merlina R, 7-3-Wendy N, 7-3-Mohan H, 7-3-Amira K, 7-3-Aidan H
tag: sb_grassrootsvideo