grv_wiki_B_feedback

Criteria-based Feedback:
** || **Student Reviewer Feedback ** || ||  || ||   || ||    || ||    ||
 * **<span style="color: rgb(234, 11, 11)">Criteria Descriptors
 * <span style="background-color: rgb(227, 222, 222)">**Quality of Content**
 * Does the content (writing) make sense? || There was too much information squeezed into each sentence. Try to make your sentences cleaner and easier to take in. ||
 * Can you identify any areas which need clarification? || It really needs to be worked on. There is too much information packed together. The information is useful, just not understandable in its current format. Try to space out the information. Everything seems so jam-packed. ||
 * Pose three questions that arise from your reading || How will GRV affect the government, politics, and employment in the future? ||
 * <span style="background-color: rgb(227, 222, 222)">**Communication**
 * Look at the Discussion pages of the wiki pages - effective communication? || There is too much complaining. You need to discuss constructive ideas instead of snapping at each other. It is not chat room, use the discussion more effectively. ||
 * Do they need more? || We think you need to explain your problems with each other's work instead of just complaining about it. This way they can see what is wrong and try to fix it. ||
 * Are they clear in their messages to each other? || No, you need to expand on your issues. Explain your problem. If no one knows what is wrong, no one can fix it. ||
 * Is there a sense of negotiation and collaboration? || Not really collaboration, it is more arguing. There was one good collaborative effort when Heidi asked for help and Daniel responded quickly. ||
 * <span style="background-color: rgb(227, 222, 222)">**Collaboration**
 * Does the work appear to be equally shared? || It appears as though Linda is doing all the work. Daniel and Heidi worked as well, but not nearly as much as Linda. We see no additions whatsoever from Yume. ||
 * Does there appear to be any difficulties by one or more members of the team? || Yes, Linda was saying she does all the work and no one else was helping. ||
 * <span style="background-color: rgb(227, 222, 222)">**Presentation - Layout and Design**
 * Amount and relevance of graphics and media - comment on that || There were no graphics or media. ||
 * Recommendations? || Embed the movie Heidi was trying to make. ||

Summary of Feedback:
For each of the questions below consider including information about:
 * Content - clarity, quantity
 * Communicaiton - between the students as collaborators
 * Wiki Presentation - design, use of graphics, layout


 * //Somethings that were going well was that there was a lot of useful information about grass roots video. You always supported your ideas with examples. The essay was well thought-out and obviously took a lot of work.//
 * //Somethings you can do to improve is that you should space out your information- try not to make it so jam-packed. Don't fight on the discussion board. It is meant for constructive communication.//
 * //One thing we learned is that China banned Youtube. Honestly, that's pretty not cool.//

The page we reviewed is: http://horizonproject2008.wikispaces.com/GRV Gov_Pol_Employ

Student Reviewers: 7-3-Kats 7-3-Shannon, 7-3-Kevin
Feedback posted May 8, 2008 See feedback post: [|http://horizonproject2008.wikispaces.com/message/view/GRV Gov_Pol_Employ/4144571] tag: sb_grassrootsvideo